Alone, the queen stood atop
the highest precipice. The towering monstrosity beneath her was the only
unconsumed land left. She looked on, oblivious to the fire engulfing innocent
people as the water they used to protect themselves only made the danger inescapable.
All too aware of her now weightless crown encrusted with worthless jewels; her
thoughts flickered to memories of her grandfathers eyes, filled with the arrogance
of unimaginable power. Queen Alsaril felt her eyes fill with the same ignorance.
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