Friday 1 March 2013

Lottery pain

                                                     Lottery Pain
I thought it would never happen the day he phoned. The day that my life would become nothing.The pressure was insane, the nation was listening and I crossed my fingers.He cheerfully shouted, "You've won the National Lottery!" I screamed but not with joy it was with pain! The last thing I felt was feet on my chest.The last thing I saw was a stampede of people charging over me. The money wasn't mine but who's was it?    By Ben and Osian



1 comment:

  1. Love you ending being a quetion that you really want to know the awnser too!!
    Lily C

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